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Right now that last paragraph comes off a little "non-encyclopedic" and I'm sure it could use some editing. I think it is important, but only for the most recent context. The main thing is to start expanding on the earlier history to place it in a wider context. Opinions are welcome. --[[User:Dystopos|Dystopos]] 17:15, 25 July 2008 (PDT) | Right now that last paragraph comes off a little "non-encyclopedic" and I'm sure it could use some editing. I think it is important, but only for the most recent context. The main thing is to start expanding on the earlier history to place it in a wider context. Opinions are welcome. --[[User:Dystopos|Dystopos]] 17:15, 25 July 2008 (PDT) | ||
*Looks fine to me. I think it sums up the current situation nicely. [[User:Wheresdib|--Wheresdib]] 05:36, 26 July 2008 (PDT) | |||
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Shooting
Right now that last paragraph comes off a little "non-encyclopedic" and I'm sure it could use some editing. I think it is important, but only for the most recent context. The main thing is to start expanding on the earlier history to place it in a wider context. Opinions are welcome. --Dystopos 17:15, 25 July 2008 (PDT)
- Looks fine to me. I think it sums up the current situation nicely. --Wheresdib 05:36, 26 July 2008 (PDT)